We showed our finished media product to the class then we got a chance to amend any criticims they had and take on board the postitives.
Ben Garvey 17 - I like the twist at the end. Liked the POV of like someone is watching her spoooooky.
George Kneedham 16 - Fab Fab Fab, music works well even though Ive heard it all day
Georgina Cooke 16 - Lighting good in the living room, helps with the genre. Blurry makes it seem like a dream.
Lucy Heathcote 17 - Would like some more tension building music when girl walks home.
The audience agreed that we were targeting the correct audience, young actors, editing and the middle class accents where all put across well.
- As the cast were women that were shown, it was commented that the beginning could be signified as being a chick flick which we didn't intend on doing, we would of we shot it again to get across our idea and genre.
- The dark lighting of the outside shots were effective and worked well with the narrative
- The narrative enigma at the end pf the film was said to be a 'good unexpected twist'
- The jerky camera style while following the 'final girl' made it more believable
- When the camera was following the girl it was effective and built tension how there was no sound yet you could still hear the footsteps. It felt like someone was following her and was good for our narrative.
- However comments were made that the wind was picked up by the microphone which gave unwanted ambient sound.
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